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 الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   4th March 2013, 11:34 am

Name: The Primordial Storm
Rank: S - Rank
Element/'s: Wind
Range: 0-200 Meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub Type: Offensive
Hand seals: Dragon, Ram, Tiger, Ram, Dragon, Boar
Description: The user summons a condense structure of wind in the form of a functioning large hawk. The hawk appears as a mass of wind, large about the size of a small house. This bird flies under the direction of the user so that it may be guided for impact. Upon impact this hawk explodes into a contained spherical storm of wind blades, a hundred thousand wind blades. The sphere's size is about a 100 meter diameter. While the hawk can fly up to 200 meters away from the user. The resulting explosion is a lasting explosion that does not dissipate until 2 posts have passed from its detonation. Everything within this will be finely sliced and diced. Its blades can pierce the defenses of those A-rank and lower with ease while capable of wearing down the defenses of those s-rank and higher. Ideal defenses would be those that supply full body coverage, otherwise from open angles the targets will be vulnerable.

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Name: Violent Wind Scattershot
Rank: A-Rank
Element/'s: Wind Release
Range: 0 - 100 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub Type: Offensive
Hand seals: Bird, Ram, Tiger, Ram
Description: The user continuously and rapidly fires an assault of miniature birds made of wind, no bigger than a foot. Each bird flies like a guided missle with adept speed and cutting capabilities due to their nature, able to blast defenses b-rank and lower and wear down those a-rank and higher. Each bird upon impact results in a condense wind explosion, capable of shredding and tearing severely with a 3 meter radius. The rate of fire could be described as 15 birds a post.

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   4th March 2013, 2:23 pm

The Primordial Storm: I think the ratio of quantity and quality should be adjusted. Hundreds of thousands of blade that can slice anything to such an extent seem a bit too powerful in such a wide area. I would suggest if it's such an amount, the blades would cut skin, some stronger blades would probably reach the muscle.

This because you also state the explosion remains for two posts. I believe pressure of the wind element would also cause hindrance to the target who was caught inside it, a negative factor to the physical balance, stability, of the opponent.

A way to keep the quality of the blades as high as you want would be to tone the amount of them considerably. In my opinion at least.

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Violent Wind Scattershot: Could you add a limited number to the birds shot? Also, would they fly say at Basic or Adept speed?

I'd also say that since the combined power of the birds released is A, since that is what you are paying for them, a bird could take down techniques of B and lower, but not pierce through. They'd explode upon impact with the surface and break that surface basically, excluding going through it. That is a bird alone doing that, so you have all the others running around.

Some information on the size of the explosion upon impact would be good, along with describing the effects (further describe molecular level and stuff)
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   5th March 2013, 11:37 am

Okay edited

Limited the blades in Primordial Storm to just a hundred thousand and they just finely slice and dice, not necessarily to dust anymore.

For the scatter shot, it's limited to 15 birds a post, they don't pierce but cut and blast through defenses. The resulting explosion for a single bird is a 3 meter radius capable of shredding and tearing severely.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   5th March 2013, 11:45 am

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The rate of fire could be described as 15 birds a post. This jutsu requires a b-rank upkeep per post.

The difference between a sustained technique like "Hien - Flying Swallow" and one like "Scattershot" is one maintains a stable form of chakra, while the other creates forms of chakra repeatedly.

Based on that, I'd say that repeating this technique per post requires A-Rank. Technically, you are not providing upkeep, but creating more birds.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   5th March 2013, 12:09 pm

Fair enough, edited to be a simple A-rank jutsu that produces 15 birds per use.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   5th March 2013, 12:29 pm

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   6th May 2013, 5:38 pm

Name: Sacrifice
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Visual Range
Type: Offensive
Hand seals: Dragon
Targeted sense/'es: All
Description: This jutsu targets only those that can see the user creating the hand seal formed as the catalyst, obviously the user must be conscious of target(s) presence. The illusion gives life to a tree(or trees if multiple targets) that grows behind the target(s). The limbs, roots, and vines of the tree all work together to apprehend the target(s) lifting them from the ground and keeping their arms out wide to the side of them, unable to move. Then strange roots/vines work to strip away the clothing of the target(s) violently, bringing about much pain as they're slashed away. Leaves fall all around the target(s). Then the horror starts, the roots/vines then spread the legs of the target(s) wide and will proceed to enter their vagina and/or anus. This becomes a violent matter of tree rape. If at any point the target(s) open their mouth, roots/vines will invade it. This will go on for as long as the user wishes or until the target(s) are released somehow. It can be a rather traumatic experience.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   6th May 2013, 6:15 pm

o.o Approved
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   11th May 2013, 10:43 pm

Name: Lightning Release: Rasengan (Rasenbolt)
Rank: S-Rank
Element/'s: Lightning
Range: 0-50Meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub Type: Offensive
Hand seals: N/A
Description: This is a variation of the Rasengan jutsu. The user forms the rasengan sphere in the palm of their hand like usual but during the formation they add the nature transformation of lightning release to the spiral jutsu. This causes several vivid blue sparks of electricity to flow around the sphere itself. The rasengan sphere is clearly seen at the center but several rings of electricity flow around it and the user's hand. The Rasenbolt can be used in two ways: as a melee jutsu thrusted directly into the target or it can be fired as a ranged attack, a preferred strategy.

When thrusted into the the opponent, there is a great surge of electricity in the target, shutting their nerves down as well as their chakra system, completely paralyzing them. Not only this but they are being electrocuted and will be killed it. The target is sent flying from the user upon impact with an amazing speed that a boom of thunder is heard as a result. The target appears like a soaring bolt of lightning. The drawback to using it in this manner is that the user's hand from the impact will receive a bit of backlash from the jutsu, their arm being put into paralysis at the thrust position and going completely numb for 2 posts.

When fired, the rasenbolt soars through the air at extreme speeds comparable to the 4th Gate. It literally is a blue flash that streams through the air like lightning. Upon impact with the target the rasenbolt expands into a vicious electrical storm/field in a flash. Those within 25 meters of its point of impact are electrocuted and killed instantly. The electrical storm/field attacks the body on a cellular level, shocking both the nervous system and chakra system but it has great destructive potential to the surroundings, obliterating an area.


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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   11th May 2013, 11:45 pm

[23:40:24] @ Jokes : lightning streaks only go around the ball, not the user themselves.
[23:40:54] Genesis : eh that i can accept as reasonable staff reply >.>
[23:40:55] Time : r
[23:41:02] Genesis : won't let me have my super saiyan moment
[23:41:12] @ Jokes : [23:39:41] @ Jokes : drop the range to 50
[23:41:13] @ Jokes : dont forget that
[23:41:31] Genesis : rasenshuriken is capable of a larger range
[23:41:34] @ Jokes : speed of the seventh gate
[23:41:35] @ Jokes : ugh
[23:41:37] Genesis : why should it drop to 50?
[23:41:46] @ Jokes : awfully fast for a jutsu dont you think?
[23:41:55] Genesis : rasenshuriken cleared a small mountain range within a second and it was wind
[23:41:57] @ Jokes : because 100 meters is hella long.
[23:41:58] Genesis : this is lightning
[23:42:00] Genesis : faster
[23:42:03] @ Jokes : cool?
[23:42:14] Genesis : hey you allow rasenshuriken as it stands
[23:42:19] @ Jokes : i don't
[23:42:21] @ Jokes : the admins do.
[23:42:24] Genesis : so i don't want to downplay it's capability
[23:42:29] Time : Lightning doesn't level shit
[23:42:32] Senou Natsuru : .
[23:42:40] @ Jokes : and actually, i think the rasenshuriken is limited/banned isn't it?
[23:42:43] Time : Lightning is more single target or randomized strikes
[23:42:53] Genesis : not clear as in level time
[23:43:00] Genesis : clear as in speed over distance
[23:43:12] @ Jokes : yes
[23:43:17] @ Jokes : let's make that speed like...
[23:43:25] @ Jokes : comparable to the 4th gate o.o
[23:43:32] @ Jokes : because i'm 100% positive
[23:43:37] @ Jokes : gai could dodge that shit.
[23:43:41] Time : Seriously 7th gates?
[23:43:41] @ Jokes : with 7th gate

Just putting this here in case some sly shit happens.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   11th May 2013, 11:54 pm

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   12th May 2013, 12:11 am

Genesis wrote:
Name: Lightning Release: Rasengan (Rasenbolt)
Rank: S-Rank
Element/'s: Lightning
Range: 0-50Meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub Type: Offensive
Hand seals: N/A
Description: This is a variation of the Rasengan jutsu. The user forms the rasengan sphere in the palm of their hand like usual but during the formation they add the nature transformation of lightning release to the spiral jutsu. This causes several vivid blue sparks of electricity to flow around the sphere itself. The rasengan sphere is clearly seen at the center but several rings of electricity flow around it and the user's hand. The Rasenbolt can be used in two ways: as a melee jutsu thrusted directly into the target or it can be fired as a ranged attack, a preferred strategy.

When thrusted into the the opponent, there is a great surge of electricity in the target, shutting their nerves down as well as their chakra system, completely paralyzing them. Not only this but they are being electrocuted and will be killed it. The target is sent flying from the user upon impact with an amazing speed that a boom of thunder is heard as a result. The target appears like a soaring bolt of lightning. The drawback to using it in this manner is that the user's hand from the impact will receive a bit of backlash from the jutsu, their arm being put into paralysis at the thrust position and going completely numb for 2 posts.

When fired, the rasenbolt soars through the air at extreme speeds comparable to the 4th Gate. It literally is a blue flash that streams through the air like lightning. Upon impact with the target the rasenbolt expands into a vicious electrical storm/field in a flash. Those within 25 meters of its point of impact are electrocuted and killed instantly. The electrical storm/field attacks the body on a cellular level, shocking both the nervous system and chakra system but it has great destructive potential to the surroundings, obliterating an area.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   1st June 2013, 12:04 pm

Name: Great Demonic Illusion: Genesis
Rank: SS-Ranked
Range: Varies
Type: Supplementary
Hand seals: Ram, Dragon, Boar, Dragon, Bird
Targeted sense/'es: All
Description:
This genjutsu can be executed in many ways left to the user for various situations. One can use a visual catalyst after performing the necessary hand seals or using the hand seals themselves for such. One could even use sound as a catalyst, even amplifying an existing continuous sound or using their chakra upon a consciously made sound. Their chakra can be used to influence certain scents to trigger the jutsu through smell. They could even project such skilled influence over certain tastes to trigger through that sense. Not to leave out the sense of touch as a catalyst, this genjutsu can be triggered through physical feelings from the user themselves in taijutsu and weapons/puppets or even through transport of other ninjutsu to trigger the genjutsu. Literally anything the user desires can be used for a catalyst of this technique to trigger upon the mind of a multitude of targets. Not to mention all of these senses can be targeted at once even through catalysts in a single use. Making this one of the most versatile genjutsu ever to exist.

Now what happens when one is caught in the genjutsu. Nothing noticeable. The genjutsu does not render one unconscious on its own nor does it alter one's perception of reality on its own. Nothing changes within the mind of the targeted by itself. Even the disturbance of one's chakra is so miniscule that this genjutsu can go undetected by sensors and sensor like abilities, including dojutsu.

The power of this technique comes from those used on the targets while this one is in effect. This genjutsu becomes the basis of making one's illusion reality for a target. The genjutsu amplifies the bodies responses to other genjutsus to a level so intricate, so detailed that other illusions really do become real. Now how is that possible? Well if a target is under the effect of another illusion or if they come under the influence of another illusion after this one. Depending on the detail of the illusion, the body will respond by physically self damaging itself to make that part of the illusion a reality for itself. Illusions of being hurt will become so real that the body is tricked into attacking itself and inflicting damage. Now this does not mean that the target is actual forced to consciously/unconsciously inflict damage with their own body but that their bodily responses do so as if actual damage had been sustained.

This jutsu always sets itself up as the first line of jutsu even if layered after others already in progress. This means that before one could even attempt to release themselves from this genjutsu, they must release themselves from the others, making this the last jutsu one could release themselves from. Other genjutsu used in combination with this jutsu can still be released by the allowed means of the jutsu and the targets skill. However this does make telling what is illusion from reality increasingly difficult for even after releasing oneself from a genjutsu that inflicted damage upon them, well they will see that damage visibly after the fact, feeling it as if it actually happened. This can bring a massive amount of paranoia within the targets.


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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   3rd June 2013, 11:56 am

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   4th June 2013, 4:57 pm

The sensor detection part, are you including up to Master level?
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   4th June 2013, 5:06 pm

Um yeah all levels....
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   4th June 2013, 5:22 pm

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