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The first one is pretty okay with me. But the second and third, not so much. We cannot really create new items that allow access to other's advance elements without the base elements. Though I still would not allow it to happen myself. Things like that cause confusion and possible problems. We need something that makes a bit more sence, not saying that your idea doesn't, its just not something that would grasp my attention, especially if I am a Lave Release user. If anything, it may irritate me.

The third, I do not believe will go so well either. Because the idea of turning into Toad Statues is a bit discouraging. I, however, would not mind the idea of encountering such events. But this is not about me, it is about our members and their enjoyment.

Sometimes it is best to make things simple, than to over shoot them. We can observe how our members react to the simple events and take it from there. Or even better, we can ask them to offer up some ideas. That way we are incooperating them into what we are doing and not pushing whatever we want on them.

If we find that some of them have an idea that we like and decide to use it, give them a reward for their help. Many sites do not allow this to happen, thus their failure begins. We all remember such a time as that... Where we wanted to quit because of some terrible event/plot taking place that was just tossed on us... Let's not be that site, that staff...

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Name of the clan: An'un (暗雲 - Dark Cloud) Clan

Bloodline name: 'Cascade of Lightning' (ライトニングのカスケード - 'Raitoningu no kasukēdo')

Clan element/'s: STORM

= Lightning

+ Water

Description: The members of An'un hail from multiple familes, who have demonstrated the potential to combine Lightning and Water into one Released element. As such, there are no distinguishing traits that bind them together, but the 'leadership' of the clan is determined by a trial by combat every decade between the families between two males (family heads) from each facet of the loosely-organized clan.

Special characteristics/traits: Since many families can have the potential, there is no single defining trait binding them all together.

History: It started off as a union between people with similar powers. They realized that the Storm Release, though powerful on its own, was better used in conjunction with other Storm users as well. So, the An'un, Dark Cloud, Clan was born. Though, while they called themselves a clan, the founders disagreed how leadership should be split, as the potential had spread throughout many prominent and lesser known families.

Roughly eighty years ago, the decision was made to have the leadership decided by a trial by combat. A sparring match to determine who had the greatest mastery of the Storm element. Each prominent family (those who held either multiple users of the Storm element, or had at least one member who had achieved great acclaim) was allowed two participants in the match, arranged to be on every decade.

Usually, this cycled between four major families, until one of them fell into shame due to a whole generation lacking the The Bloodline Limit.
... At least until the last trial two years ago, when the last son (his family having been slaughtered under mysterious circumstances) of that distanced family emerged. At the time he was a Jounin of many exploits, being a battle-maniac who delighted in combat ... regardless of the outcome. Unfortunately for the other families, this one man, whose real name was discarded to the winds, had spent most of his years of mastering his skills out in the field against true enemies, while they kept their training limited to controlled circumstances. Needless to say, they lost due to his violent and unpredictable style ... and so the Clan was ruled by the man who called himself 'Jaakuna Shinja.'

Bloodline description:

-Storm Release-

The combination of Lightning and Water is a symbolic mixture. While one does not see a storm roll in when the Storm Release is used, one DOES see interesting ... almost fluid manipulations of lightning itself.

= [Adapted from Canon Storm Release. As you can see, some similarities, but I altered it. Mostly a dislike to use things of Canon directly >>]

Bloodline weaknesses: The water is the weakness. Earth-style ninjutsu, while still nullified due to the Lightning present in a Storm Release technique, can be used to effectively hamper its usefulness since it cannot go any further than the water can ... which would most likely be absorbed by the earth. The weakness must be overcome with sheer force (lots of it).

Secret clan Jutsus:

Spoiler:

Number of members allowed: Variable (As many as there are people who want to join)

Creators notes: Permission only, sorry.

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Seems legit.

Approved.

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