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Lets give a rankin to Sameheda on how much chakra it can absorb a post please

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Name: Champloo Kendo
Rank: B
Element/'s: N/a
Range: Close
Type: Kenjutsu (Style)
Sub Type: Offensive
Hand seals: N/a
Description: Rooster-san's highly unorthodox swordplay and a fighting style based on breaking, dubbed Champloo Kendo, and ostensibly developed by himself. Taking bits and pieces from all forms of martial arts and making up the rest on-the-go as he fights his opponents, make him a force to be reckoned with. While using this technique the user usually dives, rolls and flips around. It helps the ninja make up for his lack of speed by being able to use his strikes with such speed, even taijutsu masters need to pay close attention to each attack. Ookami is the only student of this fighting style, thus only the two men know how to use it properly.

Name: Mujushin Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Element/'s: N/a
Range: Close
Type: Kenjutsu (style)
Sub Type: Defensive/Offense
Hand seals: N/a
Description: Unlike Rooster-san who uses improvisation and adaptation to win, Koi-san seems to rely on technical skill, on which he is extremely proficient. Mujushin Kenjutsu relies on perception of an enemy, position and environment awareness. The user needs to flow, instead of making rash, slices/stabs and wasting attacks. If the sword moves, it should be either to hit an opponent or gain territory to gain the upper hand upon the opponent. The technique leaves very little margin for errors, and is Ookami's response for constant attacks and skilled swordsmen.

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Ookami wrote:: Name: Champloo Kendo
Rank: B
Element/'s: N/a
Range: Close
Type: Kenjutsu (Style)
Sub Type: Offensive
Hand seals: N/a
Description: Rooster-san's highly unorthodox swordplay and a fighting style based on breaking, dubbed Champloo Kendo, and ostensibly developed by himself. Taking bits and pieces from all forms of martial arts and making up the rest on-the-go as he fights his opponents, make him a force to be reckoned with. While using this technique the user usually dives, rolls and flips around. It helps the ninja make up for his lack of speed by being able to use his strikes with such speed, even taijutsu masters need to pay close attention to each attack. Ookami is the only student of this fighting style, thus only the two men know how to use it properly.

Name: Mujushin Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Element/'s: N/a
Range: Close
Type: Kenjutsu (style)
Sub Type: Defensive/Offense
Hand seals: N/a
Description: Unlike Rooster-san who uses improvisation and adaptation to win, Koi-san seems to rely on technical skill, on which he is extremely proficient. Mujushin Kenjutsu relies on perception of an enemy, position and environment awareness. The user needs to flow, instead of making rash, slices/stabs and wasting attacks. If the sword moves, it should be either to hit an opponent or gain territory to gain the upper hand upon the opponent. The technique leaves very little margin for errors, and is Ookami's response for constant attacks and skilled swordsmen.

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Name: Sweet Scent
Rank: B
Range:45 Meters
Type: Offense
Hand seals: Snake>Hare>Monkey
Targeted sense/'es: Smell and Sight
Description: After the said hand signs have been formed, the user then uses the smell of their own sweat to trap an opponent into a genjutsu. Once smelled the technique instantly traps the opponent. The affected person begins to feel instantly dizzy and nauseous, and can hardly stand, let alone fight. The kicker with this jutsu is the fact that it attacks on two different bases, because while the gas is emitted, the genjutsu will create thousands of "flowers" that bloom around the entire area. Once the flowers are touched they will rapidly grow and "attack the opponent". Of course this is an Illusion, but the opponent will think this is all a ninjutsu and not be aware of the actually situation of being locked in a powerful genjutsu. The jutsu is named after the sweet smell of flowers it gives off once the target is affected, and can be shut off at anytime for specific people.

Name: Speed Seal
Rank: B
Element/'s: None
Range: N/a
Type: Fuinjutsu
Sub Type: Supplementary
Hand seals: Ox
Description: This technique is one of Ookami's original and signature Jutsu. It begins with a single Ox handsign, then the cloud tattoo on his right back shoulder begins to glow. Ookami's speed is instantly boosted by a drastic amount, allowing him to travel at speeds that rival a body flicker. The longer the seal last, the more lightning bolts will spread across his body, leading from his shoulder, all the way up to his neck. Once it covers the entire right side of his face and reaches his forehead, it ends. It last for 5 post and can only be used once per battle.

Name: Mujushin Kenjutsu: Kagenui
Rank: C
Element: None
Range: 5 meters
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub Type: All
Weapon/'s used: Kenjutsu (or no weapon really)
Description: For this technique the user needs to relax his body completely, adopting a "natural posture". Then, suddenly, use all his unused muscular strength to rotate the body, simultaneously evading a hit and going into range of an opponent. To the opponent it'd appear as if the user had disappeared. This technique happens incredibly fast, making it a formidable technique to counter. While it's been compared to a body flicker, the technique is simply a high speed counter into an opponents blind spot, instead of moving from point A to point B.

Name: Champloo Kendo: Shidensen
Rank: A
Element: None
Range: 15 meters
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub Type: Offense
Weapon/'s used: Kenjutsu
Description: The user adopts a stance in which his body is slightly curved and his feet are parallel. Ookami then dashes full speed towards his target, but lets himself fall, gaining tremendous momentum and acceleration. In the last possible moment, the user swings his sword upwards, slashing through an enemy with unfathomable speed. Shidensen is a lot like Iado, but uses an unsheathed blade, thus making it faster. Using this technique in a close range is almost unavoidable.

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Sweet Scent - Make the sweet scent also the gaseous release.

Speed Seal - APPROVED

Mujushin Kenjutsu: Kagenui - Umm..... Looks like Body Flicker without seals only guaranteeing the free dodge, and I'm not sure if utilizing unused muscles would allow that. We need a better explanation for this technique if you want approval

Champloo Kendo: Shidensen - Unfathomable is too vague a word to accept. Yes it does mean extremely fast but there is no outlined explanation to how fast a defender or opponent could be if they were to dodge it. Everything else about the jutsu is fine, we just need to clear that up.

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The genjutsu isn't a release, it's basically like sweating and turning that into an illusion.

Not a flicker, I can only move out of the range of an opponent and into their blindspot.

I shall edit though.

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Edited

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SERIOUSLY?! BUMP!

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Ookami wrote:: Name: Sweet Scent
Rank: B
Range: 100 Meters
Type: Offense
Hand seals: Snake>Hare>Monkey
Targeted sense/'es: Smell and Sight
Description: After the said hand signs have been formed, the user then uses the smell of their own sweat to trap an opponent into a genjutsu. Once smelled the technique instantly traps the opponent. The affected person begins to feel instantly dizzy and nauseous, and can hardly stand, let alone fight. The kicker with this jutsu is the fact that it attacks on two different bases, because while the gas is emitted, the genjutsu will create thousands of "flowers" that bloom around the entire area. Once the flowers are touched they will rapidly grow and "attack the opponent". Of course this is an Illusion, but the opponent will think this is all a ninjutsu and not be aware of the actually situation of being locked in a powerful genjutsu. The jutsu is named after the sweet smell of flowers it gives off once the target is affected, and can be shut off at anytime for specific people.

Lower the range a tad. Make it like, 45 meters, because 50 is too much Razz

Ookami wrote:: Name: Mujushin Kenjutsu: Kagenui
Rank: C
Element: None
Range: Close
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub Type: All
Weapon/'s used: Kenjutsu (or no weapon really)
Description: For this technique the user needs to relax his body completely, adopting a "natural posture". Then, suddenly, use all his unused muscular strength to rotate the body, simultaneously evading a hit and going into range of an opponent. To the opponent it'd appear as if the user had disappeared. This technique happens incredibly fast, making it a formidable technique to counter. While it's been compared to a body flicker, the technique is simply a high speed counter into an opponents blind spot, instead of moving from point A to point B.

"Close" is a vague term when used for range. Here, we use meters as you already know. Change that accordingly please.

Ookami wrote:: Name: Champloo Kendo: Shidensen
Rank: A
Element: None
Range: 15 meters
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub Type: Offense
Weapon/'s used: Kenjutsu
Description: The user adopts a stance in which his body is slightly curved and his feet are parallel. Ookami then dashes full speed towards his target, but lets himself fall, gaining tremendous momentum and acceleration. In the last possible moment, the user swings his sword upwards, slashing through an enemy with unfathomable speed. Shidensen is a lot like Iado, but uses an unsheathed blade, thus making it faster. Using this technique in a close range is almost unavoidable, a master at Ninjutsu couldn't even weave a single sign before the blade slices through their flesh.

That last part. No. You can't just change the description for ninjutsu master and that's basically what you did. Everything else is fine though.

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Edited.

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Ookami wrote:: Name: Sweet Scent
Rank: B
Range:45 Meters
Type: Offense
Hand seals: Snake>Hare>Monkey
Targeted sense/'es: Smell and Sight
Description: After the said hand signs have been formed, the user then uses the smell of their own sweat to trap an opponent into a genjutsu. Once smelled the technique instantly traps the opponent. The affected person begins to feel instantly dizzy and nauseous, and can hardly stand, let alone fight. The kicker with this jutsu is the fact that it attacks on two different bases, because while the gas is emitted, the genjutsu will create thousands of "flowers" that bloom around the entire area. Once the flowers are touched they will rapidly grow and "attack the opponent". Of course this is an Illusion, but the opponent will think this is all a ninjutsu and not be aware of the actually situation of being locked in a powerful genjutsu. The jutsu is named after the sweet smell of flowers it gives off once the target is affected, and can be shut off at anytime for specific people.

Name: Speed Seal
Rank: B
Element/'s: None
Range: N/a
Type: Fuinjutsu
Sub Type: Supplementary
Hand seals: Ox
Description: This technique is one of Ookami's original and signature Jutsu. It begins with a single Ox handsign, then the cloud tattoo on his right back shoulder begins to glow. Ookami's speed is instantly boosted by a drastic amount, allowing him to travel at speeds that rival a body flicker. The longer the seal last, the more lightning bolts will spread across his body, leading from his shoulder, all the way up to his neck. Once it covers the entire right side of his face and reaches his forehead, it ends. It last for 5 post and can only be used once per battle.

Name: Mujushin Kenjutsu: Kagenui
Rank: C
Element: None
Range: 5 meters
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub Type: All
Weapon/'s used: Kenjutsu (or no weapon really)
Description: For this technique the user needs to relax his body completely, adopting a "natural posture". Then, suddenly, use all his unused muscular strength to rotate the body, simultaneously evading a hit and going into range of an opponent. To the opponent it'd appear as if the user had disappeared. This technique happens incredibly fast, making it a formidable technique to counter. While it's been compared to a body flicker, the technique is simply a high speed counter into an opponents blind spot, instead of moving from point A to point B.

Name: Champloo Kendo: Shidensen
Rank: A
Element: None
Range: 15 meters
Type: Kenjutsu
Sub Type: Offense
Weapon/'s used: Kenjutsu
Description: The user adopts a stance in which his body is slightly curved and his feet are parallel. Ookami then dashes full speed towards his target, but lets himself fall, gaining tremendous momentum and acceleration. In the last possible moment, the user swings his sword upwards, slashing through an enemy with unfathomable speed. Shidensen is a lot like Iado, but uses an unsheathed blade, thus making it faster. Using this technique in a close range is almost unavoidable.

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