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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   5th August 2012, 6:51 pm

Added range for Crow Assault.

As for your case of the water prison. You do know that the water prison submerges the target in water where they can indeed drown or die, otherwise there would be no urgency to release those caught in it such as the case of Kakashi and Tenten, both whom were in danger of drowning amongst other things when caught by Zabuza and Kisame.

The last one I bumped up and increased range by 3, just didn't want to make it less.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   5th August 2012, 6:54 pm

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It does? Then how was Kakashi able to talk in it? O-O

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   5th August 2012, 7:10 pm

I'm pretty sure he wasn't talking but thinking lol.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   5th August 2012, 7:12 pm

He was O-O

Even the wiki says that.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   5th August 2012, 7:30 pm

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   5th August 2012, 7:32 pm

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   7th August 2012, 2:23 am

Name: Wind of Fate
Rank: C-Rank
Element/'s: Wind Release
Range: 15 Meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub Type: Supplementary
Hand seals: Boar, Bird, Ram, Dragon, Tiger
Description: This justsu summons a steady and controlled current around the target. This current of wind is like a vortex though it lacks any true offensive power alone. Think of it as the great wind breathrough in a different form. The wind is indeed strong and can cause trees to bend in it's winds. The purpose is to keep those within it where they are by pushing all around them. This jutsu is preferrably used in combination with other techniques to produce a more devastating effect. Use in conjunction with projectile weapons it could increase their potential and efficiency. The vortex spans 15 meters around the target and is 15 meters tall. The winds flow even through the center, so there is no calm spot where one can not feel the push of wind on any side. This vortex can sustain itself initially for 2 posts, however after that it will cost a c-rank amount of chakra for upkeep.


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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   8th August 2012, 12:41 am

How long does the vortex last? If it's more than two posts, I'd like to see it cost C-Ranked chakra per post for after those two first posts.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   8th August 2012, 1:02 am

I can deal. Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   8th August 2012, 2:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   12th August 2012, 6:47 pm

Name: The Coming Dawn
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Visual Range, Hearing Range, and/or Physical Touch
Type: Supplementary, Offensive
Hand seals: Clap Hands x 3, Gesture
Targeted sense/'es: Sight, Sound, Touch
Description: Following the three clapping of the hands, the user focuses their chakra for the trigger upon a body gesture. If this gesture catches the attention of the target(s), meaning they see it, hear it if it produces sound, or feel it if it involves contact with their body, they will be drawn into the genjutsu. The genjutsu causes the target to visualize the falling of black feathers, like those belonging to a crow. It is a mystical moment where all movement around them seems to slow down severely, though that is not the case in reality, for their mind is now perceiving things on a time delay out of their control. A the same time, they will feel a cut being formed along their forehead, being down with a sharp unseen blade. The cut is vertical and bursting forth from this cut is a hand, not belonging to them. This hand painfully extends from their forehead, reaching down to grip their throat. The grip is very tight, so tight that the target(s) can feel the fingers actually puncturing the neck. They will also see a sword slide forth into existence only to pierce their heart, slowly and very painfully. This sword does not seem to end and continues to slide from some invisible gate. Out of their ears they will feel barbed wire being yanked out endlessly and painfully. The barbed wire will coil around their hands in order to keep them apart, while also weaving in and out between the fingers, painfully cutting them. From their back, they will feel the painful extension of large black wings of a crow coming out, slowly. All of this will be occurring simultaneously during the illusion, so it will be quite the painful experience. From the point of seeing the feathers fall, the target(s) are no longer moving in reality and everything they do is within the realm of the genjutsu. Their bodies become paralyzed in reality once caught, while the genjutsu keeps their minds preoccupied.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   13th August 2012, 5:25 pm

ermm, two things

How are ya touchin peeps and clapping ya hands with this gesture. Like is it a gesture or clapping hands or something?

Second, is this like a three stage genjutsu, perceiving things slower, then barbed wire etc etc, and paralyzed body, or is just something else. I don't understand that part, things slow down (not in reality) but you say they are trapped in a genjutsu, so are things happening slowly in the genjutsu, or in the real world are they received slower?

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   13th August 2012, 5:36 pm

Okay, *takes breath*

Clap Hands is considered a type of hand seal, i think you know this, so the user does this seal 3 times. The trigger of the genjutsu is some kind of gesture made by the user to catch the attention of the target(s). Soooo for example to be creative, let's say I do the three hand claps, then extend my hand for a hand shake. Using chakra, this gesture becomes a trigger, so that when the target(s) see it and/or touch and feel the hand, they're drawn into the genjutsu at that point. Another example could be like Itachi's finger point when using Ephemeral, it's a simple gesture being used to catch their attention. The gesture might not always be the same when the jutsu is being used, in order to keep the versatility in executing it. But it will come after the three hand claps, and will be shown to link to the initiation of the genjutsu, which would be the falling of the feathers.

Now the genjutsu isn't really three stages, it's pretty much happening at once. Once triggered, the target(s) will notice black feathers falling all around them and at the same time things appear to be moving in slow motion. What they're seeing from this point is ultimately the illusion but incorporating bits that appear in reality to make it seem real. While time seems to be slowing and the feathers are falling, all the other things are happening as well during this at the same time. Which is why I said, Simultaneously. So no it's not a three stage genjutsu, it's just one elaborate and painful genjutsu happening all in the mind of the target(s). And since they're no longer seeing or experiencing things on a conscious level, they're actually just standing still, paralyzed, from the point of the illusion being triggered.

Does that answer everything for you?
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   13th August 2012, 5:41 pm

So it goes three claps and a gesture, which has to make contact.

I was wondering if it was either 3 claps or the gesture, kinda a and/or thing.

if its the way I said, 3 claps then a gesture

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   14th August 2012, 12:31 am

Name: Secret Puppet Technique: Ghost Work
Rank: B-Rank
Element: Wind Release
Range: Long Range
Type: Puppetry Technique
Sub Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Weapon/'s used: N/A
Description: Further the adaption of making basic puppet techniques quite offensive, Kisho infuses his wind nature chakra in his chakra threads. This gives his threads an even sharper quality than that gained when using the 'Chakra Threads: Razor Wire' technique. Not only that but by taking this route, he can now keep the visibility of his threads completely suppressed. However the sound of their movement is probably more noticed now, as the wind produces a whirring noise. These threads can easily slice through ninja wire and thanks to their versatile element can be manipulated in various ways with little to no effort, thus if say used to maneuver puppets or other objects the user's fingers barely move thus the name "Ghost Work". If the threads are ever severed, they instantly reform using the surrounding air. The threads can be used to cut through any jutsu of equal rank; except fire element C-Rank and above due to nature disadvantage. They can be used to slice through lightning element jutsu up to A-rank however, due to nature advantage.


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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   16th August 2012, 7:33 pm

I don't like that you can make the threads completely invis. This is invisibility to Doujutsu too?
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   16th August 2012, 7:35 pm

No not invisible to dojutsu or chakra sensing of course, just to the natural eye. Normal chakra threads can be made to be unseen anyway, so it's not really anything new with this tech.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   16th August 2012, 7:38 pm

Genesis wrote:
Name: Secret Puppet Technique: Ghost Work
Rank: B-Rank
Element: Wind Release
Range: Long Range
Type: Puppetry Technique
Sub Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Weapon/'s used: N/A
Description: Further the adaption of making basic puppet techniques quite offensive, Kisho infuses his wind nature chakra in his chakra threads. This gives his threads an even sharper quality than that gained when using the 'Chakra Threads: Razor Wire' technique. Not only that but by taking this route, he can now keep the visibility of his threads completely suppressed. However the sound of their movement is probably more noticed now, as the wind produces a whirring noise. These threads can easily slice through ninja wire and thanks to their versatile element can be manipulated in various ways with little to no effort, thus if say used to maneuver puppets or other objects the user's fingers barely move thus the name "Ghost Work". If the threads are ever severed, they instantly reform using the surrounding air. The threads can be used to cut through any jutsu of equal rank; except fire element C-Rank and above due to nature disadvantage. They can be used to slice through lightning element jutsu up to A-rank however, due to nature advantage.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   16th September 2012, 1:58 pm

Name: Secret Puppet Art: Hijack
Rank: S-Rank
Element: N/A
Range: Contact with Chakra Threads
Type: Puppetry Technique | Genjutsu Technique
Sub Type: Supplementary
Weapon/'s used: Chakra Threads
Description: This technique branches from the technique Puppet Performance: Skillful Achievement with a Human Body. Those with knowledge of that technique would know that this allows a puppetteer to use the body of a person as a puppet if they are willing, greatly injured to the point they are unable to resist, or if the person is dead on the battlefield. However this jutsu is more forceful using the combination of a genjutsu when the threads touch the body. This genjutsu affects every sense of the target and puts their mind in a hypnotic state where they become slave to the controller of the threads. This eliminates resistance and makes it easier to assume control. Thus the name Hijack. So it really is not different other than the added genjutsu to ensure wanted results from anyone. The hypnotic state of mind could be described as a dream world that only the target is witnessing, everything appears as they believe it to be yet in reality they are unaware their body is being controlled nor are they consciously aware of what is really happening around them. However of course there is a draw back. Severing the threads connected to the body relieves the genjutsu and gives back control to the target.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   16th September 2012, 3:30 pm

In the beginning states that the target has the be willing. Then it says
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This genjutsu affects every sense of the target and puts their mind in a hypnotic state where they become slave to the controller of the threads

So does it forcefully take over a body via genjutsu to preform puppeteer tasks or does it take over a body if they're willing to allow you control? Maybe if someone is willing to give you control of their body in the first place you don't have to put them under the genjutsu aspect of it?

Just throwing stuff out there. Hopefully you got my point.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   16th September 2012, 4:48 pm

That was explaining how Skillful Achievement With A Human Body works under those conditions of a willing person. This jutsu uses the genjutsu to force them or rather make it easier to control them against their will. This jutsu(Hijack) is being derived from the other(Skillful Achievement with A Human Body). I get your point, if they're willing then I wouldn't be using this technique and would instead be using Skillful Achievement with A Human Body. But this isn't for the willing volunteers obviously lol.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   16th September 2012, 5:07 pm

Ah haha sorry about the misunderstanding. That clarified a lot.


Name: Secret Puppet Art: Hijack

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   19th September 2012, 7:03 pm

Name: Revelation Style: Swelling Fist
Rank: B-Rank
Element/'s: Wind
Range: 8 Meters
Type: Taijutsu
Sub Type: Offensive
Hand seals: n/a
Description:This is a technique of Genesis' Revelation Fighting Style. The user throws a punch that appears average in both speed and power. However at the point of contact or complete extension of the arm, a sudden release of wind chakra occurs, and only at this point. The punch, like the fighting style, is precise and puts the user in complete control of their body so that they may freely and smoothly alter their attack mid swing in terms of aim or power or they may completely negate the completion of this technique. However at the point of contact or complete extension, should the user choose to: the sudden release of wind chakra expels from the entire arm like a shockwave, flowing outward with a hard impact to increase force of the punch to more than it appeared, enough to crush rock. The wind released can also be used to deflect incoming projectiles or halt other physical attacks, depending on the situation.
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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   19th September 2012, 7:55 pm

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PostSubject: Re: الى من يريد ان يحيا مع المسيح ج8 والاخير   30th September 2012, 11:50 pm

Name: Revelation Style: Piercing Strike
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Melee; Contact
Type: Offensive; Genjutsu; Taijutsu
Hand seals: N/A
Targeted sense/'es: All
Description: This is a technique of Genesis' Revelation Fighting Style. Using the styles precision in application of chakra only upon contact, the user applies a genjutsu instead of amplifying damage. However this genjutsu stands in for that effect. This combination of genjutsu and taijutsu basically attacks all the senses of the target producing a realistic hallucination that the strike pierced the body with deadly force. The user can punch or kick, or even tap the target and they will feel as if a hole had been torn through their body from the area of contact. The amount of pain equates to as if such a piercing strike had actually been made and the body's automatic responses behave as such. If the target looked at the "wound" they would see the hole (at least 6 inches in diameter) in their flesh and the blood spilling from it. They would even be able to touch it and feel the blood run on their hand. They would even be able to pick from it, taste the blood, and smell it. Everything about the wound would be real to every sense of the target. Depending on the location of the strike, the body could even go into shock instantly. For example, if the heart or lungs were the area of contact, the confused senses could cause the body to actually believe it has been damaged before the target can consciously realize so. They might actually start hyperventillating or suffer a heart attack due to the trauma of the genjutsu. However real this genjutsu's "fatal" wound, death can not actually result from this jutsu alone. Basically this jutsu could be used to instantly put someone unconscious (for the rest of topic or less if stated by the user) without having to kill. This could be considered a mercy jutsu of the merciless, making even death an illusion for a foe. It is also an effective torture technique.
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